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“Master, it’s the incompetence of the disciple that prevented you from breaking through before the deadline.”
“Don’t worry, your master, I can’t die.” Xu Fan said with a smile as he looked at his distraught apprentice.
“It’s the incompetence of the disciple, I couldn’t get a few more foundation pills for the master, or else…” Zongmen Tianjiao, who was kneeling on the ground, burst into tears and burst into tears for a while.
Xu Fan looked at his eldest disciple helplessly, took out a Foundation Establishment Dan and stuffed it into his mouth at will.
In an instant, five colors of divine light appeared between heaven and earth.
I read several dozen chapters from it long ago, the novel itself isn’t bad but there is no plot, author sometimes forgot what he said before and what he was going to do with mc, then suddenly he remembers those things in later chapter and end them in one paragraph with a single sentence saying “Then I realized that it wasn’t possible”, dude if you know that wasn’t possible then why did you waste half of the chapter explaining the process and convincing the author.
The two biggest flaw of this novel is:-
-> There is basically no plot, it’s a size of life novel where author keeps adding anything he want while mc keeps trying to be lowkey for no reason. Though he already showed high profile to those he shouldn’t have already.
-> The second biggest flaw is that it’s too slow… Basically mc can’t breakthrough to the next cultivation level from his current one until he reached the limit of his lifespan. So for example if a Qi Condensation Cultivator can live up to 100 years then you have to read till MC’s age reaches 100. As for what MC does in all those chapters? He keep inventing new things then their new versions which gets boring soon enough.
If you are wondering why I said “Then I realized that it wasn’t possible” Thing, let me give an example,
thanks for ur sacrifice fellow daoist, for trying to comprehend this poisonous sutra and summarize it for us, to the point you’re infected by demon heart.
Thanks brother, finally someone who understands my pain, sniff sniff
Damm that breakthrough limit thing is such bullshit from the author
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