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A machete in one hand, an orange in the other, and a gun pinned to his waist.
With a beating, you can upgrade the lottery system that draws various abilities.
Willian Crow loudly announced:
Lao Tzu’s title is “Steel Bone”!
What?
The title of the commander-in-chief of the three armed forces of the world government is also called “steel bone”?
oh~~~
What does that have to do with Lao Tzu’s title “Steel Bone”? Can he be tougher than me?
Light a cigarette.GIF
Good system and funny likeable mc. Good enough for me.
After he got the book of hatred I laugh so hard.
“A machete in one hand, an orange in the other, and a gun pinned to his waist.” Gangplank?
I was right
very slow…
C40
Very slow paced, quite monotonous, not funny
Practically a slice of life and in one piece 18 years before main plot, meaning we won’t ever see it with the actual plot speed.
That’s one of those fanfic where story feels like a side plot that won’t ever cross or come close to real plot.
My expectations were high when I saw its good rating but man, this is becoming a generic One Piece fanfiction. The beginning chapters were good and funny, and I can understand this contributed to its high rating. You can pretty much understand why the MC is acting arrogant and a troublemaker due to his system. The skills he got were good, except for the brainwashing thing which made the story a bit boring. The way he collected the children and dumped them at Bellamere’s care is hilarious. But in the later chapters, he is not just pretending to be arrogant, he is becoming one, and a major asshole at that.